Square #4--proximity
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| Lauren's dialogue |
In this activity, as we continue to build the story of our community, we are going to think about how close we are to the event.
This will help us to think about our point of view in the story. Many of you are very familiar with point of view and the way to convey narratives/stories from a first-person or a third-person perspective. For others, this might be something we sort of know about, but have not done much work with.
Let's play with different ways to tell our story of our community:
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What would a close up, right on top of the events perspective feel and look like? In the language of story-telling, we might call this a first-person narrative perspective.
Sometimes this first-person is the actual protagonist of the story, other times he/she is a witness to the event or maybe the narrator is telling a version of the story he/she has heard but not actually witnessed. But in all cases, this narrator is speaking in the first-person: This happened to me, I saw this, or I was told about this.
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What would a more distant, not directly involved perspective feel and look like? In the language of story-telling, we might call this a third-person narrative perspective.
Sometimes this distant narrator will follow the story from the vantage point of one character's mind and thoughts, but still retain the distance from the character (not speaking in the language of "I"), other times this narrator will be a god-like figure that appears to know all and see all (an omniscient narrator), and in other cases, the narrator will try to convey events in a completely objective way (not directly entering the mind of any character, but revealing thoughts and emotions through dialogue and purely descriptive detail). In all of these cases, the narrator is not actually an actor in the story.
There are all sorts of alternative and creative narrative positions that can be considered, too. Second-person uses "you" in the narrative voice, but it is really hard to maintain and there are few well-known narratives that effectively maintain this voice.
There are lots of great places to spend time thinking about how to construct stories and the importance of point of view to that. One of my favorites is Mieke Bal's
Narratology. This is a great theoretical analysis of the different structural pieces of a story. For Bal, ideology is always embedded in the structure of the story. For us, this might mean, that the point of view we choose reveals some sort of philosophical, political, psycho-social belief we feel is essential to the narrative.
You might already have this feeling. You might be saying, "I have to tell this story from my point of view." Or, "this story needs to be told from the young girl in the third row of the classroom who watched Johnny Smith get humiliated by the class bully." On the other hand, you might still be considering various approaches.
For this sketch, you will create a collage of a range of different perspectives you can bring to your narrative, to get a sense of which one feels appropriate to the story and feels consistent with the tone, feeling, and ideology (belief) you wish to convey.
Always keep in mind the narrative distances between you, your narrator and your characters. You are not directly either your narrator or your characters, even when the story is based on something real. These are your creations. So don't be afraid to play with the possibilities.
- Place in the center of the page a visual of your event. This can be symbolic, actual, etc. It can be a photo, a cut/paste, magazine image, etc. Again, consider a symbolic representation of the event, rather than a literal representation. Try to use an image that recalls the other visuals you have used to represent this event, but is not a direct replication. Keep pushing yourself to see the event in lots of ways.
- You will place a series of SIX visuals on the page around this central event, trying to get a sense of what proximity yields in telling the story. These visuals can also be pictures, magazine cut outs, can be symbolic representations, can be shapes, colors, and/or could be words.
- What would someone who is right on top of the story say or look like? Would they be represented by red? By a jagged or a soft shape? Do you have a character who has lived this story as his/her story that you will speak directly through? Put a visual of that character. Or use words that might describe that proximity: "Too close" or "happily in the middle of it all."
- What would someone who is more of a witness to the event rather than an actual participant in the event say or look like? Would this perspective be more blue, the shape of eyes or a heart?
- What would someone who is telling this story from the distance of time or space say or look like? Would you have a picture of someone some years after the event? Or an image of the location some time later? If 9/11 is the event, would you have a picture of the building of the Freedom Tower?
- What would someone who knows everything, sees everything, can anticipate everything, look like or say?
- What would someone who speaks from the facts, objective description, look like or say?
- What would someone who watches someone else go through this event, seeing things through this character's eyes, following his or her moves, but not directly participating, look like or say?
In time, you will want to chose a perspective to work with, but before we get there, let's play around with what these different perspectives might feel or look like.
Send me some images of these. I am anxious to see them.